Monday, September 5, 2011

Weeds (O.S.I.)

Hi all,

This poem is written for O.S.I. and the theme this week is weeds.

She planted thoughts
In his head
Which made him laugh
A rose
In a world
Full of weeds

11 comments:

Saras said...

Nice one!

Jim said...

W.G, I like his one BIG TIME! That might have been what Mrs. Jim did to me to tame me. :)
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shail said...

Planting a rose in a world of weeds is lovely! I like it immensely :)

Nanka said...

Laughter is the best medicine :)

Cheryl said...

You've created something special with this piece. Really enjoyed this.

teric said...

This is just great! I love your interpretation.

bel said...

Wonderful! You went a different direction than I was expecting when I started reading.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

This is a delightful piece, a joyous read!

Wayside Weeds

Laura Maria said...

Lovely piece that brought to mind sweet feelings, romantic songs, and flowers :)

Adam said...

I liked the twist. I thought she would be the weed. Well done!

SandyCarlson said...

I hope he embraced her before it was too late!