Monday, September 19, 2011

Feather (Haiku)

Hi all,

I am writing a pair of haikus for Haiku Heights. The theme this week is feather.

Could you be ever
Lighter and follow the wind
As feathers off course

If the heavy heart
Sheds her old feathers she shall
Discover new love



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12 comments:

Susie Clevenger said...

I like these a lot...I like the second especially...to shed the pain of a heavy heart to fly toward love again

Leonora Sophie said...

that is lovely! the second haiku is very clever indeed. LS

Ramesh Sood said...

You have offered great lessons here..these will help me..A BIG THANK YOU..

andy sewina said...

The second one holds out so much hope!

Lovely words!!

I'm following you...

Nanka said...

Great haiku both!! The second one is stunning!!

Morning said...

beautiful wonders.

Saras said...

The Haikus are bristling with passion! Excellent piece of work.

Sy said...

love these

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

The image of the heavy heart shedding feathers no longer needed grabs me!


Featherless Pomegranate

mjshorts said...

Two great haiku. The second one is my favourite, great image of the heavy heart shedding old feathers.

madrassi said...

quite excellent!

septembermom said...

You are awesome with haikus! Well done. I have to pen a few myself soon.