Sunday, November 20, 2011

Urn (Haiku Heights)

Hi all,

I've written a pair of haikus for Haiku Heights. The theme this week is urn.

Burn in morning light
Ashes pour out in the wind
Spirit of the earth

The urn casts shadow
Of memory and love peaks
In a timeless song

8 comments:

Judith C Evans said...

Both of these haiku have beautiful, haunting images. I especially like the second one, with its hopeful last line.

beccagivens said...

I agree with Judith!! Beautiful and haunting!

Chèvrefeuille said...

Well done crafting of the prompt "urn", i like both images. Very spiritual.

Nanka said...

Beautifully captured in the Haiku pair!! You made it immortal!!

:-Dee said...

wow... Came across quite a few urn haikus today.. but these right here steal the show!!! Very well written!!! :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

The shadow of the urn is haunting...


My Take on the Prompt

zongrik said...

ashes to ashes

P V Ariel said...

Hi Thanks for sharing
A well versed one
Keep it up
Best regards
Philip