Monday, November 26, 2012

Desert (Haiku)

Hi all,

I am writing a pair of haiku for Haiku Heights and the theme is desert.

Hot love thirsts
In a dry desert
Sand burns toes

Dreams unquenched
Mirage holds her tongue
Shower down


Green Speck said...

This is beautiful !!!

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

lovely, both of them!

Geraldine said...

I enjoyed both of these!

Geraldine said...

I enjoyed both of these!

Judith Westerfield said...

"Mirage holds her tongue" That is probably one of the best haiku lines I've ever read. Spot on.

Anonymous said...

The second one is my favorite ... middle line full of power!
Parched Bones

Pranita said...

This is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! Really!
Deserted dreams breathe on me

Gillena Cox said...

of the two like the first one more
well done

much love...

atothewr said...

Enjoyed both of these - good work.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

"mirage holds her tongue"

I am trying to imagine that! :)

Desert Monks Rejoice

Anonymous said...

very powerful - the silence of the mirage - superb

Sabio Lantz said...

Really enjoyed the first one. The second one didn't make sense to me or present a consistent image for me -- perhaps I am not awake.

PS - I prefer ONE Haiku per post so that I have one image to work with. But that is me. Thought I'd share.

BTW, you comment on my blog got spammed -- I just approved it. Thanks for stopping by.

Satya Rekha Ramaswamy said...

I loved this one... Awesome

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