I am excited to pen a couple of poems over at Sunday Scribblings and Carpe Diem.
Sounds of music notes
Drift with its jazz-like face full
Of a newborn glow
And the trumpeter
Lulls lovers to dance free in
Bluesy paradise
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These are nicely done - I've never really come to grips with Haiku and am impressed by those who do.
I love how haiku can adapt to the writer and the writer to the form. I particularly liked the 'lulls lovers' and 'bluesy paradise'.
and another love blossoms....
bluesy paradise ... now that's a word :-)
Sounds like a nice paradise to be in!
That sounds blissful..your words move as effortlessly as a riff.. jae
Wonderful haiku ~ both of them ~ 'felt like dancing' to them ~
( A Creative Harbor)
Takes me back to the days of dingy smoke filled basement jazz bars - ah, happy days!
I love blues and I could feel the rhythm in this, da dada da da
Love the music of your words and how neatly these two fit together.
You took me with you. Nice one.
Graceful and appealing...
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