Saturday, January 12, 2013

Jazz Paradise

Hi bloggers,

I am excited to pen a couple of poems over at Sunday Scribblings and Carpe Diem.

Sounds of music notes
Drift with its jazz-like face full
Of a newborn glow
 
And the trumpeter
Lulls lovers to dance free in
Bluesy paradise

13 comments:

J Cosmo Newbery said...

These are nicely done - I've never really come to grips with Haiku and am impressed by those who do.

oldegg said...

I love how haiku can adapt to the writer and the writer to the form. I particularly liked the 'lulls lovers' and 'bluesy paradise'.

Loredana Donovan said...

Lovely haiku, very musical. New follower :)

totomai said...

and another love blossoms....

Green Speck said...

bluesy paradise ... now that's a word :-)

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Sounds like a nice paradise to be in!

jaerose said...

That sounds blissful..your words move as effortlessly as a riff.. jae

Carol L McKenna said...

Wonderful haiku ~ both of them ~ 'felt like dancing' to them ~

( A Creative Harbor)

keiths ramblings said...

Takes me back to the days of dingy smoke filled basement jazz bars - ah, happy days!

Emma Major said...

I love blues and I could feel the rhythm in this, da dada da da

Nara Malone said...

Love the music of your words and how neatly these two fit together.

anthonynorth said...

You took me with you. Nice one.

Berowne said...

Graceful and appealing...