Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Script (Haiku)

Hi all,

I am writing for Haiku Heights and the theme is script:

God's plan intrigues me
Off the script, ink falls like rain
The day rewritten

Tomorrow borrows
Brokered time for man pining
For a better script

9 comments:

Reshma said...

most of us hope to get a peek at destiny to know what's been scripted for us...
Loved both the haiku.

Green Speck said...

We all hope for a better script tomorrow !!!

Sadia Khan said...

You write so well..They reach a diff tangent...unexpected ones...:)

Nimue said...

well said .. off script or not , we always hope tomorrow turns better than today :)

WabiSabi said...

I love the first one especially! Nicely done!

eof777 said...

Beautiful haiku... Really enjoyed it and glad we connected. I'm your new GFC follower. TY for stopping by.
Eliz

heavenhappens said...

Mm I love the second part of the haiku set. It is so profound x well done!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I often find myself pining for a better script. How did you know?

Weird Script

alice keys said...

I especially like the first of the pair. I like the image of ink dripping. Keep haikuing
Alice Keys