Soul dips in sunset
Sweetness of pink and purple
Darkness receives light
And thoughts drop in dusk
Remain in the heart like rain
That falls in moonlight
Thanks for reading. This week's theme is dusk:
Written for Haiku Heights
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15 comments:
Very lovely image created. A beautiful point in time.
Great write - especially the last.
The mental image your haiku evoke are wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
You've made a great case for the connection of emotion and nature--two lovely haiku :)
I so love the last one - perfect imagery.
Both so lovely!
A nice pairing of poems. Rain is an image that is evocative for me.
these thoughts will remain too..
Very imaginative! beautiful colours you paint here. And it rhymes!!
Perpetual Dusk
lovely words
The second one is my favorite!
Wonderful... and it flows beautiful like a fine rainfall. ;-)
Eliz
Lovely 'thoughts drop in dusk' is very emotive x
beautifully descriptive
Very lucid and expressive.. loved first one!
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