Saturday, January 19, 2013

Dusk (Haiku Heights)


Soul dips in sunset
Sweetness of pink and purple
Darkness receives light

And thoughts drop in dusk
Remain in the heart like rain
That falls in moonlight

Thanks for reading.  This week's theme is dusk:

Written for Haiku Heights

16 comments:

beccagivens said...

Very lovely image created. A beautiful point in time.

anthonynorth said...

Great write - especially the last.

Kendall Thorman said...

The mental image your haiku evoke are wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

wordcoaster said...

You've made a great case for the connection of emotion and nature--two lovely haiku :)

Judith Westerfield said...

I so love the last one - perfect imagery.

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Both so lovely!

alice keys said...

A nice pairing of poems. Rain is an image that is evocative for me.

Loredana Donovan said...

Your poetry is always so serene and uplifting. Lovely :)

Lady In Read said...

these thoughts will remain too..

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

Very imaginative! beautiful colours you paint here. And it rhymes!!

Perpetual Dusk

Reading Pleasure said...

lovely words

wabisabipoet said...

The second one is my favorite!

eof777 said...

Wonderful... and it flows beautiful like a fine rainfall. ;-)
Eliz

heavenhappens said...

Lovely 'thoughts drop in dusk' is very emotive x

Jennifer Cooper said...

beautifully descriptive

Manish Bhardwaj said...

Very lucid and expressive.. loved first one!