I am writing the following poem for Carpe Diem and the theme is Sakura ( a Japanese folk song celebrating spring).
Bright daughter
Waltzes in winter
Singing spring
New blossoms
Christen in fragrance
Life anew
Sakura
A song of beauty
Notes on trees
16 comments:
Are there three haiku or 3 stanza.
Either way, just lovely depiction of spring. Well done!
Notes on trees -- that's a very lovely way to look at cherry blossoms :)
Lovely sakura haiku ~ especially like the last one ~
Carol of (A Creative Harbor)
Lovely sakura haiku ~ especially like the last one ~
Carol of (A Creative Harbor)
Lovely! 'a song of beauty'
sums it up for me.
"notes on trees" -- what a fun image
I am doing a great deal of waltzing in winter and singing about spring!! Lovely!
[...] Notes on trees [...] what a find, I love that line. Nice set of haiku.
WOW,
Just WOW :)
Singing spring is always beautiful !!!
Notes on trees
My favorite image
JzB
When trees sing, I listen! :)
Drumming haiku
I love the first, the second and the third. Lovely
Beautiful personifications and those 'note' trees - marvelous
lovely
much love...
This is beautiful to read... ;-)
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