Friday, February 8, 2013

Sakura (Haiku)

Hi all,

I am writing the following poem for Carpe Diem and the theme is Sakura ( a Japanese folk song celebrating spring).

Bright daughter
Waltzes in winter
Singing spring

New blossoms
Christen in fragrance
Life anew

Sakura
A song of beauty
Notes on trees

16 comments:

Lolly said...

Are there three haiku or 3 stanza.
Either way, just lovely depiction of spring. Well done!

theeclecticeccentricshopaholic said...

Notes on trees -- that's a very lovely way to look at cherry blossoms :)

Carol L McKenna said...

Lovely sakura haiku ~ especially like the last one ~

Carol of (A Creative Harbor)

Carol L McKenna said...

Lovely sakura haiku ~ especially like the last one ~

Carol of (A Creative Harbor)

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Lovely! 'a song of beauty'
sums it up for me.

haikuplatespecial said...

"notes on trees" -- what a fun image

WabiSabi said...

I am doing a great deal of waltzing in winter and singing about spring!! Lovely!

Kristjaan Panneman said...

[...] Notes on trees [...] what a find, I love that line. Nice set of haiku.

jrbhaiku said...

WOW,
Just WOW :)

Green Speck said...

Singing spring is always beautiful !!!

Jazzbumpa said...

Notes on trees
My favorite image

JzB

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

When trees sing, I listen! :)

Drumming haiku

Brudberg said...

I love the first, the second and the third. Lovely

joanne said...

Beautiful personifications and those 'note' trees - marvelous

Gillena Cox said...

lovely


much love...

eof777 said...

This is beautiful to read... ;-)