Sunday, February 17, 2013

Sugar & Iceberg (Haiku)

Hi all,

I have written a pair of haiku for Haiku Heights and Carpe Diem.  The themes are sugar and iceberg.

Two lumps, please
With your croissant smile
Sugar bliss

Break the ice
My crystal island
Has a heart

13 comments:

Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram said...

I like the second one. Very crystal clear of heart. Best wishes.

Green Speck said...

The 2nd stanza is just so beautiful !!!

theeclecticeccentricshopaholic said...

the first haiku's my fave.. conjured such pretty images ^^

Maliny, said...

beautiful set !

Reading Pleasure said...

Very beautiful two.

Charleen said...

The first haiku makes me want a cup of coffee to accompany the croissant smile. :-)

Reshma said...

Smile sweetens and brightens life like no other indeed... beautiful set:)

Nimue said...

Croissant smile is so so yumm :)

Heather Fields said...

These two are beautiful! Yet again so few words that paint such amazing imagery. A croissant does sound good right about now.

Brudberg said...

Iceberg poem is very good :-)

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Awesome take on the prompt for today. Welcome at Carpe Diem, a daily haiku meme. I am your host on Carpe Diem.

alice keys said...

"Croissant smile" My favorite line in a haiku today.

Adriana Dascalu said...

I loved your second one! very inspired.