Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Trifle (Acrostic)

Toying with her words
Rose lips lingering on
In the evening scent
Future husband rising up
Lapping up the moon
Empty speech is trifle

Written for: Acrostic Only


Saras said...

Excellent Acrostic. Well done.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hey..I agree!! Sharp and very well done-

Kay said...

trifle indeed. that paints a very sad picture to me

makes me want to scream "GET OUT! GET OUT! GET OUT NOW!!!"

Opaque said...

Yes, "empty speech is trifle".

Being Pramoda... said...

Hey..thats very well written..keep it up..

Nice blog and keep expressing..:)

JStar said...

I love the flow of this :)

Nadege said...

lovely & meaningful, pretty girl.

septembermom said...

Great acrostic. You get so much across in those few lines.

Jim said...

This is a neat and needed message, W.G. Got to keep up the good impression with our speech where romance is concerned. I enjoyed it.
I just finished mine, also on romance (love).