Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Preponderance (O.S.I.)

Hi bloggers,

This poem is written for O.S.I. The theme for this week is preponderance. My poem is a creative twist on the word:

His ascension
In the doorway
Of my heart
Burns like the sun
Upon blue sheets
The heart skips a beat
Rapturous gaze on me
His gravitational laugh
Echoes out into the vast
Walls of present, future, and past

10 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Ahh..this is an interesting twist..very smooth Katina! Nice lines as usual.
Thanks..hopefully this evening I can publish. Have a nice one-

Opaque said...

Something to ponder. Something to feel.

JStar said...

I know this feeling all too well...Its what my heart is going through as we speak :)

septembermom said...

This moves very well!

Amity said...

I was transported into your poem...:-)

I felt the feelings etched in every words!!!

Tumblewords: said...

Nicely done!

Jim said...

Nice, W.G. I could read in 'Jim' instead of 'preponderance' and my heart would go pitty-pat!
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pieceofpie said...

i like the thought of his ascension into one's heart....

workerv said...

Great lines, WG I am speachless, Sooooo lovely.

Patti said...

wonderfully done- I love the "ascension into the heart"