This poem is written for O.S.I. The theme for this week is preponderance. My poem is a creative twist on the word:
His ascension
In the doorway
Of my heart
Burns like the sun
Upon blue sheets
The heart skips a beat
Rapturous gaze on me
His gravitational laugh
Echoes out into the vast
Walls of present, future, and past
10 comments:
Ahh..this is an interesting twist..very smooth Katina! Nice lines as usual.
Thanks..hopefully this evening I can publish. Have a nice one-
Something to ponder. Something to feel.
I know this feeling all too well...Its what my heart is going through as we speak :)
This moves very well!
I was transported into your poem...:-)
I felt the feelings etched in every words!!!
Nicely done!
Nice, W.G. I could read in 'Jim' instead of 'preponderance' and my heart would go pitty-pat!
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i like the thought of his ascension into one's heart....
Great lines, WG I am speachless, Sooooo lovely.
wonderfully done- I love the "ascension into the heart"
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