Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Preponderance (O.S.I.)

Hi bloggers,

This poem is written for O.S.I. The theme for this week is preponderance. My poem is a creative twist on the word:

His ascension
In the doorway
Of my heart
Burns like the sun
Upon blue sheets
The heart skips a beat
Rapturous gaze on me
His gravitational laugh
Echoes out into the vast
Walls of present, future, and past


Kilauea Poetry said...

Ahh..this is an interesting twist..very smooth Katina! Nice lines as usual.
Thanks..hopefully this evening I can publish. Have a nice one-

Opaque said...

Something to ponder. Something to feel.

JStar said...

I know this feeling all too well...Its what my heart is going through as we speak :)

septembermom said...

This moves very well!

Amity said...

I was transported into your poem...:-)

I felt the feelings etched in every words!!!

Tumblewords: said...

Nicely done!

Jim said...

Nice, W.G. I could read in 'Jim' instead of 'preponderance' and my heart would go pitty-pat!

Anonymous said...

i like the thought of his ascension into one's heart....

workerv said...

Great lines, WG I am speachless, Sooooo lovely.

Patti said...

wonderfully done- I love the "ascension into the heart"