Sunday, January 2, 2011

Calmed (O.S.I.)

Hi all,

Here is my first poem of the New Year. This is written for O.S.I. and the theme this week is calmed. I have written this poem in Sedoka form.

Where prayer flows, lips meet
Wisdom answers in due time
Glory raining in blue skies

Calmed in new sunrise
Gentle in speech, soft and meek
Answers flood an open heart

16 comments:

Teresa said...

You've set the bar high for this years poetry. I love this! So true that when we are calm, the answers can come to us.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Ya, I liked this too- again, including the link was helpful. Very interesting! Much wisdom (I have to agree with the above poster)- sharp- "answers flood an open heart"..great start to the New Year!

Jim said...

HAPPY NEW YEAR KATINA !!! :)

I like your Sedoka. You are very brave in trying new forms. Your Sedoka completes the cycle very nicely, prayer, slow answer-wisdom to prayer, and finally a flood of answers to the prayer.
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Scribbling Girl said...

wow ur experimenting awes me...love the form and the poem.....amazing :)

Sherri said...

This is deep and meaningful...I read it several times. Beautiful!

Hazel Farlough said...

One word: BEAUTIFUL

Tumblewords: said...

Wonderful form for your lovely words!

ρομπερτ said...

me thirst for such hope 'floating' through your words.

please have a wonderful tuesday.

daily athens

Jingle said...

impressive.
Happy 2011.

SandyCarlson said...

And fill the heart with love and mystery!

Steve Finnell said...

you are invited to follow my blog

Sumit Sarkar said...

Very well written..
specially the last line...
:)

ms pie said...

oh that was so filled with everything good and hope overflowing

Ann said...

It was a remote controlled helicopter. It was quite small about two feet long.

It looks like winter.

septembermom said...

Beautiful to contemplate.

Angelica Cotos said...

Simply Beautiful.