Hi all,
Here is my first poem of the New Year. This is written for O.S.I. and the theme this week is calmed. I have written this poem in Sedoka form.
Where prayer flows, lips meet
Wisdom answers in due time
Glory raining in blue skies
Wisdom answers in due time
Glory raining in blue skies
Calmed in new sunrise
Gentle in speech, soft and meek
Answers flood an open heart
Gentle in speech, soft and meek
Answers flood an open heart
15 comments:
You've set the bar high for this years poetry. I love this! So true that when we are calm, the answers can come to us.
Ya, I liked this too- again, including the link was helpful. Very interesting! Much wisdom (I have to agree with the above poster)- sharp- "answers flood an open heart"..great start to the New Year!
HAPPY NEW YEAR KATINA !!! :)
I like your Sedoka. You are very brave in trying new forms. Your Sedoka completes the cycle very nicely, prayer, slow answer-wisdom to prayer, and finally a flood of answers to the prayer.
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wow ur experimenting awes me...love the form and the poem.....amazing :)
This is deep and meaningful...I read it several times. Beautiful!
One word: BEAUTIFUL
Wonderful form for your lovely words!
me thirst for such hope 'floating' through your words.
please have a wonderful tuesday.
daily athens
impressive.
Happy 2011.
And fill the heart with love and mystery!
Very well written..
specially the last line...
:)
oh that was so filled with everything good and hope overflowing
It was a remote controlled helicopter. It was quite small about two feet long.
It looks like winter.
Beautiful to contemplate.
Simply Beautiful.
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