Hi all,
This poem is written for O.S.I. and the theme this week is accidental.
Unbridled tongue
Heated words
Was it accidental?
Unravelling from your lips
Incendiary speech
Purely accidental?
Kindling fires
Raging wars
Merely accidental?
Leaving scars
On my soul
Unaccidental
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This is very touching many of us speak and do before we realize who we hurt we should learn for that concept great writing!
Thanks for the nice words about my poem! I'm following you now. I love what you wrote as well. Very smoothly put together.
Hi there..ya I agree, this is a good take on the prompt Katina- the lines were good! Enjoy your day-
Very nice..liked it.. yes, the difffering perceptions make life interesting..
Wonderful take!
a book in which I am contained
Nicely done, as always! Isn't it a shame that sometimes those accidental words are the ones we remember the most and the best? Thank you so much for the kind words you left on my post- they are very appreciated!
The only point on which I agree with Freud--there are no accidents. Touching. Love and life can be brutal.
Hi, I found you via Kelly's Write With Pictures.
I love this poem. I describes moments we have all been through, I think.
Best wishes,
Mervat
www.thewritinginstinct.blogspot.com
PS I love the name of your blog!
Love the repetition of the word 'accidental'. Very nice!
Very inventive and skilfully expressed!!
sadness is no accidental at times.
powerful writing,
eloquent delivery.
Unintentional perhaps, accidental, never.
I like your word, unaccidental. :)
(??, poetic license ??)
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Great pace to this one. Very interesting.
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