Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Impossible (Haiku)



Hi all,

I'm writing a pair of haikus for Haiku Heights and the theme is impossible.

The eyes can dream but
A wingless man shall never
Soar as birds in flight

Dreamer aspire more
To be as one with visions
And live on pure faith

9 comments:

void said...

this is really beautiful. you are a talented writer.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Very nice and reflective! I was just thinking last night, how faith is simple enough..yet we still struggle with it? Well I missed you! Hope you had a great weekend-

Nanka said...

Very insightful words and you think so deeply!!

andy sewina said...

Good logic here, but I sense a creative imagination behind the words.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Grace said...

A wingless man is a poignant image. And to live in pure faith.. that we all hope to do. Nice haiku set ~

Ruchi Jain said...

nice work..

Chèvrefeuille said...

what a nice duet of haikai, thank you for sharing.

our lovely haiku
more and more a rising art -
I bow my head

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Icarus soared...but he was just a bit careless about it!

Impossible River

septembermom said...

Wonderfully captured in your verse!