Monday, October 17, 2011

Vibrant (Haiku)



Hi all,

I've written a pair of haikus for Haiku Heights using the 3-5-3 format. Hope you enjoy!!

Shadows now
Chasing as mirrors
Perfect sun

In your eyes
The world beams your love
Fully mine

12 comments:

Susie Clevenger said...

love them...shadows chasing as mirrors..good job!

Sheelonee Mukherjee said...

and the mirrors scatter the light.i like! :)

Paige said...

Simply romantic and sweet.

Ruchi Jain said...

Fully mine,, the last line is awesome.

covnitkepr1 said...

Nice...very nice. I believe a persons eyes can say a lot.

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urban butterfly said...

beautiful! I especially love the 2nd haiku! :)

septembermom said...

Oooh! I like "chasing as mirrors." Well done my friend:)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Beautiful work Write Girl/ Well done my friend.


Melanie

Darryl Fabia said...

The second one gives chills--the good, sweet kind.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

When you see those love beams, how can you resist?

One Take on Vibrant

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hey, romantic take on vibrant..terrific my dear!

The Orange Tree said...

love your 3 5 3 Haikus.

awesome imagery of mirror and sunshine.