Sunday, February 12, 2012

O.S.I.: Vital

Hello all,

This Sunday evening I am happy to write a new poem for O.S.I., and this week's theme is vital.


Beautiful
First sun
Feeling the breeze
Palms open to sky
Rising up to catch
An eternal blessing

Today feels new
I can sense in your eyes
Vitality and joy
Youth renewed
So I open the gates
And let faith
Send you back
To me

9 comments:

Geraldine said...

This is a wonderful interpretation of this oh so positive prompt. Love it!

Happy Week, G :<)

Jim said...

Hi W.G. ~~ I'm liking this, I too can feel the breeze. This and the promises inferred sure beat staying under the covers!
Isn't a second chance every morning wonderful!
I am being literal again. Hope you don't mind too much. I do that quite often. ;)
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mareymercy said...

A lovely take on the prompt!

Harshad mehta said...

He will return and with new vigor!
Beautiful piece.

Lady Whispers said...

Beautiful <3
Amen to your wishes :)

Amber said...

So vivid and precise. Really liked it! : <3

septembermom said...

Positive on so many levels! A great take on the prompt :)

SandyCarlson said...

Beautiful. May you know joy. Your poem makes me long for a fresh spring day!

Gyanban said...

Beuatiful take, lovely lines, enojyed reading.