This Sunday evening I am happy to write a new poem for O.S.I., and this week's theme is vital.
First sun
Feeling the breeze
Palms open to sky
Rising up to catch
An eternal blessing
Today feels new
I can sense in your eyes
Vitality and joy
Youth renewed
So I open the gates
And let faith
Send you back
To me
9 comments:
This is a wonderful interpretation of this oh so positive prompt. Love it!
Happy Week, G :<)
Hi W.G. ~~ I'm liking this, I too can feel the breeze. This and the promises inferred sure beat staying under the covers!
Isn't a second chance every morning wonderful!
I am being literal again. Hope you don't mind too much. I do that quite often. ;)
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A lovely take on the prompt!
He will return and with new vigor!
Beautiful piece.
Beautiful <3
Amen to your wishes :)
So vivid and precise. Really liked it! : <3
Positive on so many levels! A great take on the prompt :)
Beautiful. May you know joy. Your poem makes me long for a fresh spring day!
Beuatiful take, lovely lines, enojyed reading.
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