Saturday, January 19, 2013

Dusk (Haiku Heights)


Soul dips in sunset
Sweetness of pink and purple
Darkness receives light

And thoughts drop in dusk
Remain in the heart like rain
That falls in moonlight

Thanks for reading.  This week's theme is dusk:

Written for Haiku Heights

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very lovely image created. A beautiful point in time.

anthonynorth said...

Great write - especially the last.

Unknown said...

The mental image your haiku evoke are wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

Anonymous said...

You've made a great case for the connection of emotion and nature--two lovely haiku :)

Judith Westerfield said...

I so love the last one - perfect imagery.

Unknown said...

Both so lovely!

alice keys said...

A nice pairing of poems. Rain is an image that is evocative for me.

Lady In Read said...

these thoughts will remain too..

Woman'n'Beyond said...

Very imaginative! beautiful colours you paint here. And it rhymes!!

Perpetual Dusk

Reading Pleasure said...

lovely words

Anonymous said...

The second one is my favorite!

Eliz Frank said...

Wonderful... and it flows beautiful like a fine rainfall. ;-)
Eliz

Anonymous said...

Lovely 'thoughts drop in dusk' is very emotive x

Unknown said...

beautifully descriptive

Manish said...

Very lucid and expressive.. loved first one!