Sunday, February 17, 2013

Sugar & Iceberg (Haiku)

Hi all,

I have written a pair of haiku for Haiku Heights and Carpe Diem.  The themes are sugar and iceberg.

Two lumps, please
With your croissant smile
Sugar bliss

Break the ice
My crystal island
Has a heart

13 comments:

கா.ந.கல்யாணசுந்தரம் said...

I like the second one. Very crystal clear of heart. Best wishes.

Amrit Sinha said...

The 2nd stanza is just so beautiful !!!

Anonymous said...

the first haiku's my fave.. conjured such pretty images ^^

Maliny said...

beautiful set !

Reading Pleasure said...

Very beautiful two.

Charleen said...

The first haiku makes me want a cup of coffee to accompany the croissant smile. :-)

Reshma said...

Smile sweetens and brightens life like no other indeed... beautiful set:)

Pratibha said...

Croissant smile is so so yumm :)

Anonymous said...

These two are beautiful! Yet again so few words that paint such amazing imagery. A croissant does sound good right about now.

brudberg said...

Iceberg poem is very good :-)

Chèvrefeuille said...

Awesome take on the prompt for today. Welcome at Carpe Diem, a daily haiku meme. I am your host on Carpe Diem.

alice keys said...

"Croissant smile" My favorite line in a haiku today.

Unknown said...

I loved your second one! very inspired.