This week's Simply Snicker's Challenge uses the words Jeer, Jump, and Just.
Jump into life
Head first
Swimming freely
Time rolling like waves
The sun rising in your eye
Like a balloon
Drifting towards the sky
Heed not to jeers
Just ride
In the tide of life
Friday, May 8, 2009
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8 comments:
"Just ride
In the tide of life" - Amen to that!!! Keep writing!!!
This just flows..it's like that too, isn't it- being on a ride? Honest, sometimes I want off!ha.. nice one-
I feel the energy in this one! Love riding that "tide of life".
How inspirational. Just what I needed this morning. Seems life always takes us where we need to be. Thanks for creating ang sharing this most inspiring poem.
oh yeah*
i like the thought of jumping into life head first :0)
Nice visuals for my imagination!
Thank you, Write Girl!
Angie
this is awesome...who knew the fewer the words the more inspiration lay in them :) am following u r blog...i think its a tiny but sparkly gem :)
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