Friday, May 8, 2009

Simply Snicker Challenge #7

This week's Simply Snicker's Challenge uses the words Jeer, Jump, and Just.

Jump into life
Head first
Swimming freely
Time rolling like waves
The sun rising in your eye
Like a balloon
Drifting towards the sky
Heed not to jeers
Just ride
In the tide of life

8 comments:

Brosreview said...

"Just ride
In the tide of life" - Amen to that!!! Keep writing!!!

Kilauea Poetry said...

This just flows..it's like that too, isn't it- being on a ride? Honest, sometimes I want off!ha.. nice one-

septembermom said...

I feel the energy in this one! Love riding that "tide of life".

cordieb said...

How inspirational. Just what I needed this morning. Seems life always takes us where we need to be. Thanks for creating ang sharing this most inspiring poem.

Nadege said...

oh yeah*

sojourner said...

i like the thought of jumping into life head first :0)

Grieving Mother/Therapist, Angie Bennett Prince said...

Nice visuals for my imagination!

Thank you, Write Girl!

Angie

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

this is awesome...who knew the fewer the words the more inspiration lay in them :) am following u r blog...i think its a tiny but sparkly gem :)