Sunday, May 3, 2009

Forbidden Fruit/ Divorce

This week's Acrostic Only challenge are the words Divorce and Forbidden Fruit.

Dividing
Intimate
Vanities
Oscillates
Reckoning
Cloaked
Endeavors


Flirtatious
Odes
Ruefully
Breed
Illegitimate
Dreams
Drifting
Erratically
Naked

Felicitations
Recedes
Under
Intuitive
Touch

11 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Wow..this is really good. I had to read it over several times just to chew on it. Pretty powerful words. I'm kind of witnessing one break up and one make up? It seems I'm working on (at least mentally) less words. This is excellent.
Well I went ahead and accepted my bloggy friendship award..heh heh..now I get to post it to the side! Much appreciation to you-

Anonymous said...

Great Stiff! It reads like a "Cracking Whip, Exposing the pain of it all"

Anonymous said...

oop! Great Stuff....

Brosreview said...

Ah! great stuff indeed!!! Keep them coming!!!

floreta said...

wow this is really good! i imagine this to be quite a challenge.

anthonynorth said...

Enjoyed both - especially the 'fruit' bit.

septembermom said...

Excellent word choice. I like cloaked endeavors. I love the power of a single word in a poem. This form of poetry gives the poet the chance to choose great impact words. Well done!

J said...

Heh, I was going to say I like 'cloaked endeavors' too, and then realised someone had beaten me to it.

Amias said...

Very good word usage here .. to many Divorces are forbidden fruit.

virgo27 said...

great! love "fruit"

Amias said...

Hi Write Girl,
Congratulation! I am happy to announce that your poem was chosen as “Honorable Mentions” in our "Best Weekly Acrostic" contest. Your acrostic is amazing, and I certainly appreciate your participation. Go HERE to see how it is presented. Thanks again for participating, and do join us again!