Sunday, September 20, 2009

Simply Snickers: Travellers

The following poem is inspired from last week's prompt over at Simply Snicker's. The accompanying painting is Samuel Prout's Travellers on a Path in an Extensive Landscape.

Canopies opening
Heavenly, celestial
Blue skies swooning
Darkened prairies
Cattle grazing
Brown rivers
Eroding earth
Travellers roll
Without time
Reclining minds
Cast their eyes
Upon eternity
Elated glories
Cascading crowns
On earthly vessels


Yellow Tulip said...

very nice dear..enjoyed my read:)

septembermom said...

Love the rhythm! Imagery is terrific as always.

Brosreview said...

Yes, I "love the rhythm" too. Well done!

Kilauea Poetry said...

Really nice choice of words with this wonderful it-

Nadege said...

hey write girl, your poem captures the feelings
& emotions going through the minds of these
early travellers.

Judith Ellis said...

I smile always at the beauty, simplicity and depth of your lines. Thank you.