Thursday, September 24, 2009

Simply Snickers: Through the Reed

This week's Simply Snicker's Challenge includes the words read or reed and rest and wrest.

Look out through the reed
Waltzing with the breeze
We spy with our eyes
The dotted skies
Sweet ambiance
And pure reflection
Time and life
Embrace without detection
Morning's yellow glory
Wrests with night
The dawn yawns
With the twinkle of midnight


Brosreview said...

Bravo! Keep writing!!!

Stanis said...

lovely write!

septembermom said...

Embrace without detection - I like that one a lot! Good job!!

Kilauea Poetry said...

This is one of the best..they are all wonderful, but somehow I guess this just spoke here to me this photos necessary! I think they have there place (I just tweeked the body poem), but what a beautiful piece-
I was briefly a part of a poetry site before I really got rolling on blogger and one fellow thought I shouldn't use detracted, so he thought? Anyway, just wanted to say that this is another of yours that in my opinion is the case! Have a great weekend-

Judith Ellis said...