This week's OSI Prompt is Colors. You can check out other beautiful poems by clicking on the link.
Awakening autumn breaths
Orange, yellow, and gold
On fallen leaves
And paints the bark
A deep mahogany
White clouds thicken
In a sapphire sky
Dipping in the glow
Of a tangerine sunset
Black outlines of birds
Suspended in midair
With feathers cascading
Like plum velvet
Brisk air with silver whips
Pinch pink and brown cheeks
Human shadows growing gray
In blue embers of winter
Red dusk of summertime
Rising like the phoenix
Trails the hem of sunset
Memories and feverish bursts
Ripen on an artist's canvas
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Absolutely beautiful!
I was lost in the imagery.
This was really pretty..I especially enjoyed the way you wrapped up the last stanza..
Red dusk of summertime..trails the hem of sunset..memories and feverish bursts ripen on an artists canvas- another beautiful piece for this season-
That was funny..we must of been writing at the same time. That acrostic..I did one of the swine flue but the two photos I had made my blog ugly! I'll repost it now..cause I'll have something else up soon anyway- it's kind of amusing?
"Red dusk of summertime
Rising like the phoenix" beautiful!
I'm in full agreement with Stanis here! :D
Lovely poem my friend. I too love red sky's at night.
love-Melanie-bhd
The colors described feel alive to me as I read this poem. Thank you.
Lovely! I'm particularly fond of the hem of sunset!
beautiful imagery! you paint a great picture..
That last stanza is just plain gorgeous! I enjoyed this.
Ah! Well done! Great imagery here! Keep it up!
This is excellent, I loved every line! Well done.
your words are an artists canvas, lovely.
beautiful dear:)...loved this:)
the ending is perfect. love how lush the colors make this poem :)
i figured I say hello since i found on OSI and that your name was write girl, my name is wordy girl nice to meet you. I am going to follow your blog.
What a lovely, lovely poem! There is so much here that made me think, but autumn as the rising phoenix of summer truly remains with me.
Hey WG,
You are an artist with amazing abilities I love your writing style!!!:D Well Done!
Hi, u set the bar high,,each time you do your
best work, u come back and do your best WORK.
This is one of your BEST(: Keep them coming!
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