Thursday, January 21, 2010

Summer Rain (Acrostic)

I chose the lovely Acrostic Summer Rain for my next poem, which conjures up a beautiful image in the dead of winter. Special thanks to Amias for these delightful prompts:

Sultry, soaked kisses
Under the umbrella
Marries foreign lips
Musically passionate gifts
Enveloping the earlobes
Raindrops caress skin

Releasing inner bliss
A childlike leap
In silvery puddles
Near lovers feet

12 comments:

Brosreview said...

This one, and I mean this, is one of your best works. I need not write more.

Saras said...

Nicely written Acrostic. Refreshingly different take on the prompt. Well done.

Meow said...

Nice :) this is different.. and the best of what i read so far..

Tan said...

Yes... that described it!

JStar said...

Lovely...In the cold, this was very heart warming...

septembermom said...

raindrops caress skin...very nice.

You're so good at these!!

workerv said...

WOW! JUST BEAUTIFUL. Near lovers feet...

C Will said...

Hey WG
This is just beautiful and oh so tender!!:)

Nadege said...

"...musically impassioned lips enveloping
earlobes..." an iridescently seductive poem,
write girl, as rain is for me.

Amias said...

Oh this is so beautiful, so romantic ... and so refreshingly different, still you captured "summer rain".

Amias said...

You know you have a place in the anthology, so why are you waiting to send me your bio, photo, and permission?

vidya said...

wow, this is refreshing! well done