Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Sitting Duck (Acrostic)

She's an
Island between
Two
Towering men
Ingesting
Naked lies
Guns

Drawn
Under her
Cheek
Kissing steel

Posted for: Acrostic Only

7 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Ooo..this has a bite!! Very slick you-
My son..he was too young, lol! Hope you have a wonderful evening-

Amity said...

Wow....you easily KISSed it dear!

Thumbs up for a job well done!

Opaque said...

Very very unique!

JStar said...

Ok, I see the fire in ya...Beautiful write, as always :) I come to your blog excited, wondering what else can come out of the beautiful head of yours...Still in aweee..

Jenners said...

Ok ... this one is different and I like it!

Nadege said...

very powerful, very hot, very film noir - LUV.

Quiet Paths said...

I do believe this is one of the best Acrostics I've ever read.