This week's O.S.I. theme is empty.
Alas, the hour is spent
Dipped in red roses and wine
Evening rustles her purple veil
Rising in the starlit sky
When love surrenders
Tumbling in fragrant sheets
Intertwined in a thirsty embrace
Till the cup is empty
Dipped in red roses and wine
Evening rustles her purple veil
Rising in the starlit sky
When love surrenders
Tumbling in fragrant sheets
Intertwined in a thirsty embrace
Till the cup is empty
15 comments:
Can feel the emptiness in this one...
A pleasant take on the idea of emptiness. Lovely wording.
Beautifully crafted word pictures, I like this take on empty... a little bittersweet - the cup is empty, but the sweet memory remains.
Seemed more of a quench? Nice job on the prompt!
I feel the emptiness when he leaves...Because when he is there I never want that feeling to go away...
May you always keep the cup full with constant flow.. beautifully written..
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Very nice!
What a joy for the senses ! Please have a wonderful Tuesday and thank you very much for the visit.
daily athens
Nicely written - very visual!
Reads like a song too me. Wonderful!
My favorite part:
Tumbling in fragrant sheets
Intertwined in a thirsty embrace
Till the cup is empty
*swoons* Beautifully will written :)
WOW!!! Wonderful words, beautifully crafted.
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oh yes, vivid and sensual pretty girl.
What a lovely transportation here Write Girl! This is just so dreamy, not really empty! Sensual!
Thinking about that thirst....Wow. Beautiful poem.
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