I am writing this poem for O.S.I. The theme this week is evening.
He carried the evening
In his arms
The glory of the moon
And the heavenly stars
She opened her palms
Embraced the great night
Beautiful, black ebony
Milky Way swimming and bright
In his arms
The glory of the moon
And the heavenly stars
She opened her palms
Embraced the great night
Beautiful, black ebony
Milky Way swimming and bright
9 comments:
It's lovely, WG, and I have several meanings.
If the 'night' were spelled 'knight' it would be a wonderfully sweet love story. Reading it aloud might cause the listener to think thusly as it stands without the 'k.'
At first I was thinking God but unless you switched genders like one of the modern ways of writing, that would be out.
I believe that I will stick with the lovers and leave the 'knight' at home, alone.
Okay? :)
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I totally agree with Jim above..the first line sounds so good to me
Indeed, this is beautiful.. wow!!
Stunning and romantic. Thank you.
Eternal I want this love to stay...Juz' mesmerizing!!
Keep blogging..:)
Hey WG,
Your words are beautiful & visually lovely!!!:)
This had me going..it's beautiful and, though imagery gets over-used..its great!
I posted more than normal this past week..why I plan to float till this weekend (smile). Well, I hope you enjoy your evening..stay warm:)
What a dazzling poem! I loved it!
Your poem is so beautiful and loved Jim's comment here!! He is so correct. I admired it with the K and without too :) excellent!!
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