Monday, January 4, 2010

Wings (O.S.I.)

This week's O.S.I prompt is Wings and here is my impression:

Wings dipped into morning
Resting along the sunrise
Swooning on the wind's breath
Now fluttering to the sky
Prism of colors and design
Distinctly delicate and refined
Designed by heavenly creation
Soaring to the firmament with elation

19 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

This is very discriptive and each word painted so pretty.."distinctly delicate and refined"
The weather is cooler now and things are drying up (must be really cold your way) I do wish you the best for this coming year and certainly look forward to more of your writing.
Regina-

Amity said...

God's designs and creations are truly marvelous!

Opaque said...

Each line, each word speaks volumes here. Very well done!

JStar said...

So much beauty within these few lines...

Saadi said...

Once again, you've left me speechless!

septembermom said...

Wonderful imagery. Love the "feel" of these lines.

zoya gautam said...

.. great images

lovely ..

Judith Ellis said...

Beautiful! Beautiful! What a gifted poet you are!

Quiet Paths said...

Truly uplifting words! thank you...

Cook.ThePoet. said...

This is beautiful and deep. Loved it

-Cook.ThePoet.

Tumblewords: said...

Wings dipped into morning - a delightfully phrased image! A lovely piece.

Nancy Bea said...

Very refreshing image!

Anonymous said...

beautiful imagery..
very nice!

Loch Rob said...

Wings dipped in the colors of sunrise. I like it.

Judith Ellis said...

Okay....awaiting more beauty... :-)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Just lovely my friend. You seem to get better and better.


Melanie

C Will said...

Hey WG
Everytime I check you out another wild and wonderful ride you take me on. You are just the best!!:) much love!!

workerv said...

So good to see you're spreading your wings
Fly girl! fly...Fly...Fly

gabrielle said...

Wings dipped into morning, rising, rising. Lovely!