A man sleepwalks with a solitary gait
A single thought upon his mind
He strikes a single chord
The piano sings a note
An ode to the brilliance of the moon
He inhabits the black horizon alone
The stars are his groupies, he thought
Single is the light in a room of darkness
Flickering to a bluesy tune
One lonely girl wishes upon a star
A single tear kisses her loveless cheek
He blinks at the imagery
She’s a beautiful, sweet single
Monday, February 8, 2010
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9 comments:
"loveless cheek" - good image. I enjoyed this poem very much!
I liked this one..clever lines to the last stanza-
very beautiful imagery...
thanks! :)
I gotta say 'Loveless cheek' gripped my attention the most!
oh, i had to read it twice, grasping it as a whole...lovely.
Beautiful and thoughtful words, vivid imagery!
Dear Write Girl,
Your poem is singularly lovely. A quiet
and deep desire for love is sustained within
your poem, so that I feel for each person.
Mia
Talk about imagery, you had me 'tingling' before the end with that happy sad single tear.
I love it! :)
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BTW, my OSI this week has a guy getting single. Not very romantic, that.
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Beautifully done.
You'll find mine here.
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