Saturday, February 6, 2010

My Country (Acrostic)

Here is another lovely prompt from Amias at Acrostic Only


Molded in Godly faces
Yearning on new shores

Cradling arms Lady Liberty
Opens her peaceful borders
Ushering the masses onward
Nostalgic for clearer waters
Tasting freedom on lips
Receding sorrows and pasts
Yesteryears embrace new hope



Posted for: Acrostic Only

8 comments:

Judith Ellis said...

Your way with words is spellbinding. Wonderful!

Amias said...

I like this, but I was hoping to read about your "personal" country ... this is why I put the word "my" in front of country. Still, Judith is right, your words can be spellbinding.

Jenners said...

I really liked this one. You could have taken it so many ways but you made it "stand alone" and not just as an acrostic. Loved it!

Brosreview said...

Ah, peaceful, beautiful! Well done!

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

awsomely done..

i am having trouble commenting on your blog..

Saras said...

Good take on the prompt, dear.

C Will said...

Hey WG,
Thanks for letting me see through someone else's eyes just beautiful!!:p

Amity said...

beautifully written dear....