Saturday, February 27, 2010

Comets (Acrostic)

Celestial wonder of eyes
Orbits the midnight skies
Magnificent tail of dust
Evokes the distant galaxies
Trajectory course yet unknown
Stunning bursts of universe




Posted for: Acrostic Only

10 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Wow..this is nice..flows perfectly..In fact this is what it reminds me of-
I just saw a really terrific photo..check it out here-
http://darkerview.com/darkview/index.php?/archives/1619-Postcard-from-the-Universe-Rosette.html
Have a great weekend-

Kay said...

well done.

Amias said...

An outstanding acrostic!

rdl said...

good one!!

Cynthia said...

Hello Write Girl, this acrostic is positively
mind-altering! Quite metaphysical.

Brosreview said...

Very well done! I love the metaphors!

septembermom said...

Perfect acrostic!

JStar said...

Your talent speaks for itself!!!! Your words touches my heart deep down...

C Will said...

Hey WG,
You have captured this magnificently.!!:p well done!!

Saadi said...

Ur description could actually be used in a text-book!!!!

Awesome-ness!!!