Artwork By Kuzma Petrov-Vodin, Spring (1935)
Shy, coquettish Laura Lee
Your lips anoint me like the buds of spring
I thirst for playful romps in the grass
To dive into your ocean-blue dress
But I digress cowardly folding my hat
As you are preoccupied with the world beneath
If I could live inside your great, brown eyes
I'd steal your thoughts from those blue skies
Written For Magpie Tales
15 comments:
Oh that's wonderful! I'd fall for those lines any day! I love the line:
Your lips anoint me like the buds of spring
What a delightful take on this... I think she is certainly missing out :)
That's quite a crush! Hope she gets over being shy and doesn't let him pass by!
To dive into your ocean-blue dress...?
Bet he'd make a big splash...
This is truly crush-ing ;-)
Fine, imaginative take on the prompt.
I'd steal your thoughts...
I wonder if he'd like them if he did? He might get a surprise - especially if she was dreaming of somebody else. lol
I enjoyed the playfulness of your poem ...
This is absolutely gorgeous =)
and what a beautiful anointment that would be.......
Beautiful, romantic poem! :)
If you don't fall for that second line, you are ice inside!
How beautiful.
My heart is fluttering...
Love this line: If I could live inside your great, brown eyes,
I'd steal your thoughts from those blue skies.
Lovely :-)
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