Monday, April 13, 2009

Child Eyes

Your eyes glean
A childlike curiosity
Flickering and dancing
Like a firefly beholding light
In ecstasy
Of the thing you possess
With child eyes


septembermom said...

The whole world to see with a child's eyes. Great topic for a poem. Love the firefly reference.

Anonymous said...

"A Child Eyes" I see my little great grand son's
face and the glean in his eyes. You captured the beauty of innocence.

Jenners said...

I like the images in this poem. You put a lot in a short amount of space!

Brosreview said...

I missed this one as it did not show up as an update. Damn!!!

Well, I liked it right from the title. I liked the analogy too. Good job!!!

Keep writing!!!

judith ellis said...

This piece is just so lovely. Thank you.

Regina Marie said... fleeting and innocent..precious but something to cherish-

floreta said...

simple and effective. i just picture a happy baby! :)

C Will said...

Sometimes I don't have the words to express how much I enjoy the motion(movement)in your words beautiful!!:)