Your eyes glean
A childlike curiosity
Flickering and dancing
Like a firefly beholding light
In ecstasy
Of the thing you possess
With child eyes
Monday, April 13, 2009
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8 comments:
The whole world to see with a child's eyes. Great topic for a poem. Love the firefly reference.
"A Child Eyes" I see my little great grand son's
face and the glean in his eyes. You captured the beauty of innocence.
I like the images in this poem. You put a lot in a short amount of space!
I missed this one as it did not show up as an update. Damn!!!
Well, I liked it right from the title. I liked the analogy too. Good job!!!
Keep writing!!!
This piece is just so lovely. Thank you.
Youth..so fleeting and innocent..precious but something to cherish-
simple and effective. i just picture a happy baby! :)
Sometimes I don't have the words to express how much I enjoy the motion(movement)in your words beautiful!!:)
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