Sunday, April 5, 2009

Revelations

Revelations
Undulate and flow
In the still dawn
Glistening in the moonlight
And settling upon the rooftops
Of the weary
Their secrets echoing
In dormant ears
Morning rustles her skirt
And they scatter

10 comments:

floreta said...

beautiful! a lot of simple presence in this poem.

septembermom said...

This is just my kind of poem: defined images, succinct powerful words chosen with care. Well done once more :)

Brosreview said...

You steadily manage to astound me with such crisp imagery. Keep them coming!!! Brilliantly written!!!

Regina Marie said...

This is a nice one.."Their secrets echoing
In dormant ears
Morning rustles her skirt
And they scatter"

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Saadi said...

"Glistening in the moonlight
And settling upon the rooftops"

Loved this line!!

Thumbs up!

C Will said...

This is a wonderful poem it is with knowledge that relevation is passed and if we are not careful it will scatter..very insightful:)

judith ellis said...

Incredible writing! Just amazing!

Pretty Me!! said...

i loved the imagery !!

LazyKing said...

You are very good. nice job