Sunday, April 26, 2009

Confinement

This week's Acrostic Only challenge is the word Confinement.


Consenting to coiling chains
Oppressive measures
Negate free spirits
Finding their destinies
Inclined to shame and blame
Needlessly bleeding and dying
Empty and devoid of
Musical inspiration or inclination towards
Enlightened paths guiding
Nimble spirits in flight
Tightened under the shadow of fear

8 comments:

septembermom said...

Great job with this acrostic! Love to do those.

Amias said...

I am so glad you are sticking with us, White Girl, and I expect to see your "Wild Is The Wind".

C Will said...

Your writing is amazing I love "Nimble spirits in flight Tightened under the shadow of fear" just beautiful!!:)

workerv said...

Well, you have done it! This is the first
time you caught the anguish of the human
spirit. Chained men, yet free, confined in
their minds, bound by fear. Prisoner of our
society.

virgo27 said...

love the acrostic! what area do you live in? just wondering if u perform live in your area? have you thought about doing it, if not?

Kilauea Poetry said...

interesting-
"consenting..inclined & fear (tightened)
"Oppressive measures
Negate free spirits
Finding their destinies" This was sharp-

Brosreview said...

This is fantastic!!! Well done!!!

anthonynorth said...

Powerfully done. This is so often what it is to be human.