We dream there are
Vast worlds
In our minds
Discovered only when
We fall with sleep
Eyelids penetrate
Unnameable galaxies
Blink
And you'll float in clouds
Deep and pink
Thick as heat
Blankets of the mind
Oh let us sink deeper
Unfurling in flight
We become great thinkers
Herders of sheep
Numbered like stars
Leap
And you'll land on Mars
The sun rises
And dreams melt like dew
The remnants of night
Still stirring like stew
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10 comments:
I really love your style of writing. I can tell from your writing that you are a cheerful, bubbly person...the kind that you just want to be friends with. I get a lot of positive energy.
great Job!
Wonderful way of expressing dreams and how it fades away as dawn approaches. Fantastic! Keep writing!!!
I just love the tempo of your writing. The "herders of sheep" line is my favorite! ;)
This is one of my favorites. Terrific imagery!
Hey WG
Your writing is like an oasis in the desert so descriptive "And dreams melt like dew" Love what you do!!:o) thanks for the smile !!
Hi WG.
I haven't commented in a while now but trust me I read all your post in google reader. I have written a couple of pieces and although I know our writting styes are very different I would love to hear what you think.
Thanks,
Craig
From a real writter I wanted to add! LOL
Craig
Your work is so thought provoking..
I enjoy and look forward to all
you do. Thanks!
Oh! this was one of the best poems i read on dreams .. liked it so much :)
There is a lot of hope & nudging.."the remenants of night still stirring" Nice one-
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