Tuesday, March 2, 2010

January (Conclusion)

Here is the conclusion to January. Thanks for reading:

"Will you do me one more favor," January asked, pressing against him.

"Yes, whatever you want," he consented.

"Will you kiss me?" He watched her blue lips turn pink as she closed her eyes.

Softly, he planted a kiss upon her. Her cheeks ripened like apples, and she was falling like rain.

"What's happening," he asked perplexed. He watched her quickly dissolve into a puddle.

A woman crouched low in her place. She was wrapped in January's cloak. She shivered half frightened, and she began to run her hands against her skin. She stretched out her legs and wiggled her toes in surprise.

She leaned against his legs, her palms pressing into him. He noticed the blue in her eyes resemble the blue glow of January. The wintry queen had melted before his eyes.

"I'm yours if you'll have me," she said, trembling to rise. "I've always wanted to live on earth. To be loved." Felix extended his hand towards her and kissed her softly.
He spent a season fashioning several paintings after her. In her, he discovered pure, aesthetic art, and they grew as friends and lovers.

When the project was completed, Felix held an event for his art collection. One wealthy buyer was seduced by the portrait of a woman. She was cloaked in the blackness of night, stars dangled from her robe, and a crescent moon smiled adoringly above her head.
"What a stunning woman," the buyer exclaimed. "What is her name?"

"January," he replied. "My muse."


Anonymous said...

good~ keep sharing with us, please....I will waiting your up date everyday!! Have a nice day........................................

hope said...

lovely :)

JStar said...

Girl your writing is so vivid and details..Puts me right in the scene

septembermom said...

Awesome ending! Loved this so much. I could just see the shivering woman waiting to be acknowledged by her love. Amazing.

C Will said...

Hey WG,
Oh January has been a wonderful story. I am so delighted this is fantastic!! This makes me feel so good!! You are such a Jewel Thank you !!:)

Unbreakable said...

Well i hope we all find our January. I think you writing skills is one to admire well i do admire it a lot, well i am an Accountant so i know nothing much about writing.

workerv said...

I just loved it, what a wonderful ending. One
of my favorite, your're amazing. Your work
is paving the way, keep moving ahead!

J Bar said...

Beautiful colours.
Sydney - City and Suburbs

Saadi said...

U so need to write a short stor...ur freak'in amazing at it!!

A said...

a lovely end to a lovely story :D well done :)