Monday, March 8, 2010

Hesitation (O.S.I.)

Move where the currents stir you
Wait patiently for the face of time


Welcome waves when they beguile you
Be cautious to opening your borders


Explore the limitless glory of the universe
You cannot reach your destination without a compass

Be joyous and carefree
Many tasks and chores await you

The universe is your canvas to paint upon
There isn’t a brush big enough to capture it

Stretch your arms towards the stars
How long until we reach our destination

Pour out all your love like rain
Be careful who you give your heart to

Strike the flames of passion and let it burn
A scented candle is much safer

Endless thoughts and contradictions
Alas, the heart is filled with hesitation

18 comments:

Anitha@Work said...

Beautiful verses. Interesting oxymorons!

Kilauea Poetry said...

Wow..this was really sharp! Positive yet with a lot of wisdom! Excellent job!!

Amity said...

Wow....!!! I said wow...and I mean it so...what form of poetry is this!

I like it girl...:)

You truly amazed me here!!!

Thanks for sharing dear! And thanks for your visit in my blog, too! Keep coming back please!

Sweetest in the Gale said...

You expressed the feeling of hesitation very distinctly...wonderful take on the prompt!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Lovely, lovely, lovely. So deeply felt and expressed. Love it.



Melanie

workerv said...

One of your best! You went to the well.
Just beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
So True....So True...

septembermom said...

You know I love the "universe is your canvas" one. Everything written here is wonderful. You have such a gift.

Tumblewords: said...

Clever use of prompt. It's a wonderful piece!

Geraldine said...

This is wonderful! Spot on.

Brosreview said...

Very wise usage here! I love the red lines! The redness adds to the feel! Well done!!!

C Will said...

Hey WG,
You are just brilliant you have transformed emotions into words and they move with such passion and feelings!! Love your beautiful mind!!!:)

lissa said...

I like the contradiction, what we thought and we want not to think collides so easily

Jim said...

Great, W.Girl! Polar positional thoughts to the max. I am for a happy medium, can there be one?
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Julie said...

Love the contradictions between the green and the red, beautiful.

Patti said...

Very creatively intepreted! Lots of different meanings on different levels- love that!

SisterJulia said...

Oooh! Like the way you've done this:)

gabrielle said...

"Pour out all your love like rain
Be careful who you give your heart to"

stopped me dead in my tracks
and covered them right quick!

gabrielle said...

Ah, the hesitation in hesitation. Brilliant!