Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Floating (O.S.I)

Born to float downstream
Baby birthed in blue
Breathing in beautiful morning
Eyes drifting in the heavens above

Years skipping out like rocks
Born to float downstream
Young arms swim in love
Satisfied by the fragrant breeze

Body submerged in water
Spirit slowly drifts away
Born to float downstream
To a glorious eternity


lucychili said...

nice flow of life

Tumblewords: said...

Lovely flow!

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hi there, pretty words!
Years skipping out like rocks..and the last part almost feels like the human element woven in. Very nice!

D.S. Lear said...


JStar said...

Beautiful flow...Oh so heavenly...

Michele Spector said...

This has such a beautiful flow to it, great rhythm. Loved the meaning behind the words. Nicely done!

Opaque said...

Satisfied with the smooth flow here.

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Jingle said...

awesome flow,
cool poem!

Jim said...

Hi W.G ~~ I like your progression here; it is like having my life flash in front of me.
I might add, ashes to ashes, dirt to dirt came to mind also. I would like my ashes thrown into a stream, one that goes into a sea not too far away.
Thank you.

Aayushi Mehta said...

"Born to float downstream"

Nadege said...

breathtaking, heartbreaking...ethereal.
I adore your talented mind, pretty girl.

SandyCarlson said...

Your poem leaves me feeling peaceful and relaxed.

C Will said...

Hey WG,
Your creativity is always flowing!!well done!!!:)

septembermom said...

so peaceful...