Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Trembling (O.S.I.)

Hi bloggers,

This week's O.S.I. prompt is trembling.

Blowing in from the wind, cool sway
While darkness sweats long into night
She wakes while the moon softly plays
Her nightgown blows and meekly sways
Dreams alive in the stars above
Sweetened galaxies swim in light
His shadow rises, body sways
Trembling, their lips kiss velvet night

14 comments:

Brosreview said...

Trembling in fear; trembling in love!

Jim said...

W.G, I wanted to write this poem! I really did! But my words weren't flowing pretty like yours. This is so nice and touched with a little sensual feelings, just right.
Anyway, so instead I opted for a tribute to a dear deceased friend on my OSI.
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Tumblewords: said...

Nicely written - vivid imagery and tender thoughts.

Leo said...

absolutely marvellous... tremble in love, and the imagery is absolutely fantastic!

Kilauea Poetry said...

Yes, vivid imagery! Sounds dreamy..must be a mood! Hope you have a wonderful evening!

Amity said...

wow...so vivid, so true, so romantic...the trembling kiss, itself!

loved it dear!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

WG, this is wonderful. I love the words and imagery. I would love to be loved like this.
Well done.


Melanie

JStar said...

Romance causes trembling...Trembling in the soul....

Patti said...

This was a beautiful poem~ loved the line "Dreams alive in the stars above"...thanks!

Tammy Brierly said...

Hot stuff!

Kathiesbirds said...

Very nice. I love all the images of the night.

Tammie Lee said...

this is quite beautiful~

septembermom said...

Nice and vivid. Great!

Nadege said...

beautiful, sensual -very & romantic.
well written write girl.