Hi bloggers,
This week's O.S.I. prompt is trembling.
Blowing in from the wind, cool sway
While darkness sweats long into night
She wakes while the moon softly plays
Her nightgown blows and meekly sways
Dreams alive in the stars above
Sweetened galaxies swim in light
His shadow rises, body sways
Trembling, their lips kiss velvet night
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Trembling in fear; trembling in love!
W.G, I wanted to write this poem! I really did! But my words weren't flowing pretty like yours. This is so nice and touched with a little sensual feelings, just right.
Anyway, so instead I opted for a tribute to a dear deceased friend on my OSI.
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Nicely written - vivid imagery and tender thoughts.
absolutely marvellous... tremble in love, and the imagery is absolutely fantastic!
Yes, vivid imagery! Sounds dreamy..must be a mood! Hope you have a wonderful evening!
wow...so vivid, so true, so romantic...the trembling kiss, itself!
loved it dear!
WG, this is wonderful. I love the words and imagery. I would love to be loved like this.
Well done.
Melanie
Romance causes trembling...Trembling in the soul....
This was a beautiful poem~ loved the line "Dreams alive in the stars above"...thanks!
Hot stuff!
Very nice. I love all the images of the night.
this is quite beautiful~
Nice and vivid. Great!
beautiful, sensual -very & romantic.
well written write girl.
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