Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Love (Haiku)

She is conscious of
The red aching in her heart
Rising up to love

Written for O.S.I.

9 comments:

Kilauea Poetry said...

Oh I like your lovely Haiku! haven't written any in awhile..its neat that you have to really think about just a few words to play with. Have a nice evening-

Opaque said...

AH! I can feel this one!

JStar said...

Beautiful expressions in such little words...They are so powerful and the message relayed!!! I have a hard time writing a Haiku because I always have so much to say lol...

Jim said...

You did great with those seventeen syllables. I came to see how you would treat the 'love' prompt and you did it up proud. :)
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C Will said...

Hey WG,
What a wonderful bite of passion "Rising up to love". well done!!:)

Cassiopeia Rises said...

ah, this is a lovely Haiku. I really liked it. Well done.


Melanie

SandyCarlson said...

I wonder what she will do.

septembermom said...

Beautifully expressed.

Kathiesbirds said...

Now this is nice and what I think a haiku should do, capture an idea in a small package and make you feel it!