She is conscious of
The red aching in her heart
Rising up to love
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9 comments:
Oh I like your lovely Haiku! haven't written any in awhile..its neat that you have to really think about just a few words to play with. Have a nice evening-
AH! I can feel this one!
Beautiful expressions in such little words...They are so powerful and the message relayed!!! I have a hard time writing a Haiku because I always have so much to say lol...
You did great with those seventeen syllables. I came to see how you would treat the 'love' prompt and you did it up proud. :)
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Hey WG,
What a wonderful bite of passion "Rising up to love". well done!!:)
ah, this is a lovely Haiku. I really liked it. Well done.
Melanie
I wonder what she will do.
Beautifully expressed.
Now this is nice and what I think a haiku should do, capture an idea in a small package and make you feel it!
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