Poor man determines
To win over his sweetheart
With poems in his eyes
Inspired by Haiku Heights (Fortitude)
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23 comments:
This is outstanding... with poems in his eyes.... how truly beautiful this Haiku is.
One of the best ever lines I read here... delightful...you have created magic..
RS:)
I was going to skip this week's prompt too (as I did last week), but your little gem inspires me to come up with SOMEthing. Thank you!
Did he succeed?
beautiful poem! so much emotion in those few words! I'm with Speck on this: did he succed?
so nice!
Of course he succeeded! He may have been poor, but he had fortitude--and poetry!
Fortitude of Blossoms
So endearing.
Aws! How lovely...I want to know more, too. Did he succeed?
Have a lovely weekend!
Scudds xx
Here's a lovely story - well done!
Hey, ya gotta go with what ya got, eh?
That last line wins a song from the heart strings! Beautiful!
wow what beautiful imagery...poem in his eyes..loved it...
Beautiful sentiment.
What a gret line "poems in his eye" love it
aawww!! *bows* Wonderful!
Beauty, Glory, Joy, Pain & Fortitude.
oOvely and romantic portrayal of fortitude.
This such a beautiful haiku :) x
"Poems in his eyes" - that is a classic line. Perfection
Perfect haiku.
A really great poem. Perfect delivery. Love that last line!
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It encouraged to submit a poem this week. I really liked that last line especially. Perfect deliver.
Rich in heart, poorman
Won his sweetheart
with poem in his eyes!
Enjoyed your romantic Haiku.
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