Hello Haiku Lovers,
I am writing for Carpe Diem and the theme is Yuki no hate (end of snow)
The thrill of snow doves
Falling to the earth softly
Melt blue winter's heart
As leaves unfurl green
Tree barks yawn and stretch their limbs
Creatures seeking spring
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Vivid images in your words.
Really nice.
Cheers!
JzB
I long for spring too! :-)
Snow doves falling? Oh, dear! I hope it's not because they've been shot!
Brush Away Snow
A lovely take on he prompt. Thank you for sharing with us :)
You really amaze me with your imaginary often. Lovely.
The forst one is very good.
aloha WG - i like what you are going after in the 2nd ku here. i also like the use of fragment and phrase in this one as well. aloha.
aloha WG - i like what you are going after in the 2nd ku here. i also like the use of fragment and phrase in this one as well. aloha.
aloha WG - i like what you are going after in the 2nd ku here. i also like the use of fragment and phrase in this one as well. aloha.
sorry for the extra posts, i was having difficulty with my eyes and figuring the system out. i apologize. please feel free to delete two of them. aloha.
"blue winter's heart"
What a chilling image! Good it's being melted!
Last Snowflake
Both so lovely! Well done!
Green leaves invite snow :-)
Unfurl, yawn, stretch - you've given them a lot a life
Line One is certainly a great opener and represents the theme well
much love...
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