Wednesday, March 13, 2013

Snow Doves (Haiku)

Hello Haiku Lovers,

I am writing for Carpe Diem and the theme is Yuki no hate (end of snow)

The thrill of snow doves
Falling to the earth softly
Melt blue winter's heart

As leaves unfurl green
Tree barks yawn and stretch their limbs
Creatures seeking spring

17 comments:

Jazzbumpa said...

Vivid images in your words.

Really nice.

Cheers!
JzB

Anders Woje Ellingsen said...

I long for spring too! :-)

Loredana Donovan said...

Lovely haiku! :)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Snow doves falling? Oh, dear! I hope it's not because they've been shot!

Brush Away Snow

Poet Laundry said...

Beautifully done!

jrbhaiku said...

A lovely take on he prompt. Thank you for sharing with us :)

Lady Whispers said...

You really amaze me with your imaginary often. Lovely.

Brudberg said...

The forst one is very good.

Wrick said...

aloha WG - i like what you are going after in the 2nd ku here. i also like the use of fragment and phrase in this one as well. aloha.

Rick.Daddario said...

aloha WG - i like what you are going after in the 2nd ku here. i also like the use of fragment and phrase in this one as well. aloha.

Rick.Daddario said...

aloha WG - i like what you are going after in the 2nd ku here. i also like the use of fragment and phrase in this one as well. aloha.

Rick.Daddario said...

sorry for the extra posts, i was having difficulty with my eyes and figuring the system out. i apologize. please feel free to delete two of them. aloha.

Mark M. Redfearn said...

"blue winter's heart"

What a chilling image! Good it's being melted!

Last Snowflake

Maggie said...

Both so lovely! Well done!

Green Speck said...

Green leaves invite snow :-)

jody said...

Unfurl, yawn, stretch - you've given them a lot a life

Gillena Cox said...

Line One is certainly a great opener and represents the theme well

much love...