Hi all,
I am writing for Poetry Jam and the theme is prism.
Prism of words
On the doorstep
Of my heart
Your voice is the jewel
Unwrapped before me
On a crushed, red rose
And I choose
To unravel
Your vowels
And allow myself
To surrender
To light
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Loved that ending stanza! "I choose to unravel your vowels" my favorite line :-)
nice....esp like that last stanza...unwrapping the vowels...great line....and surrendering to their light...nice....smiles.
Lovely words and i am with Brian the last stanza of surrendering to light is really good. Great poem made my light up inside
unravel your vowels... love that
Just beautiful. Love the last stanza too. Enjoyed:
"And allow myself
to surrender
to light" especially!
Your voice is the jewel
Unwrapped before me
Nice...I liked your total poem
What a lovely interpretation of prism! Prism of words!
So romantic for a relationship with words. I can't help but feel what I do about them though.
Long time - no see!
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Nice imagery - 'unravel your vowels', 'surrender to light'.
... 'and I allow myself to surrender to light' ... what a wonderful statement! Gave me shivers!
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