Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Prism of Words

Hi all,

I am writing for Poetry Jam and the theme is prism.

Prism of words
On the doorstep
Of my heart

Your voice is the jewel
Unwrapped before me
On a crushed, red rose

And I choose
To unravel
Your vowels
And allow myself
To surrender
To light


SaraV said...

Loved that ending stanza! "I choose to unravel your vowels" my favorite line :-)

Brian Miller said...

nice....esp like that last stanza...unwrapping the vowels...great line....and surrendering to their light...nice....smiles.

alan1704 said...

Lovely words and i am with Brian the last stanza of surrendering to light is really good. Great poem made my light up inside

Laurie Kolp said...

unravel your vowels... love that

Mary said...

Just beautiful. Love the last stanza too. Enjoyed:

"And allow myself
to surrender
to light" especially!

artbyrae said...

Your voice is the jewel
Unwrapped before me

Nice...I liked your total poem

Loredana Donovan said...

Surrender to light, I like that ... letting go of control. Lovely poem, smiles :)

Peggy said...

What a lovely interpretation of prism! Prism of words!

Anonymous said...

So romantic for a relationship with words. I can't help but feel what I do about them though.

Louis la Vache said...

Long time - no see!
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Nice imagery - 'unravel your vowels', 'surrender to light'.

Susan Lindquist said...

... 'and I allow myself to surrender to light' ... what a wonderful statement! Gave me shivers!