Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Simply Snickers Challenge

I discovered this fun new blog: http://simplysnickers.blogspot.com/
through my friend Beloved Dreamer. Create a poem using these three words: sacred, sorrow, surrender. I'm up for a challenge!


Sacred hearts pause on lovely words
And sorrow flees like darkness beholding light
Yielding silence they fully surrender
Black words dance to their delight
Strumming melodies that linger on till midnight
Sacred sorrows surrendering to words that breath life

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great job! I couldn't stop reading it
over and over, and over again, so
simply beautiful.

Regina Marie said...

This is really good! One of your best-

C Will said...

You string these words together like fine pearls just waiting to be wore...simply beautiful!!
You are a breath of fresh air.:)WOW

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

What a powerful closing line!

Thanks for participating at SIMPLY SNICKERS – weekly poetry prompts

Put you on the blogroll. C'mon back anytime! ;-)

Linda

BLOOD BROTHERS

judith ellis said...

You have such a way with words. My spirit sings.