Monday, March 23, 2009

Stay Awhile

Stay awhile, she said
And bribed me with some cookies
So warm and moist on my lips
I felt a little wiggle in my hips
Her boyfriend brings out the chips
My fingers settle in the dip
Pig out, chow down, and loosen that belt
A pain in my stomach was all I felt

7 comments:

C Will said...

This just made me smile!!:)

Judith Ellis said...

There is often such a playful nature to your writing. There is an undeniable loveliness.

Opaque said...

Lovely!!! Instantly brought a smile on my face. Thank you for that!!! Keep writing!!!

septembermom said...

You have such a gift for adding a fun, playfulness to your poems. I love when a sweet picture is painted in my mind after reading one of your poems. You're a delight!!

Anonymous said...

Reminds me of one of those punk rocker songs and I can imagine a girl with pink hair and a little tutu dress, saying this.I like.

Saadi said...

"Pig out, chow down, and loosen that belt"

Hahahaha...made me chuckle!

Cheers!

Kilauea Poetry said...

Oh this was funny..I loved it and it sums up just about how I feel!!