Monday, March 9, 2009

Lovely Thoughts of You

Lovely thoughts of you
Running in the park
Chasing butterflies
Laughing after dark
Lovely thoughts of you
Soaking in the rain
Crying on my shoulders
Riding on the train
Lovely thoughts of you
Whispering in my ear
Holding me so close
Your voice so calm and clear
Lovely thoughts of you
Never dissipates
Rising like a cloud
And falling down like grace.


Andrea said...

Wonderful fluid!! :)

C Will said...

Like all of your poems this one knocks me off my it!!:)

septembermom said...

Those lovely thoughts keep this love alive. It fills the speaker's soul so completely. You convey all that contentment and gratitude felt by this young lover so well in this poem. Bravo!

Brosreview said...

Wonderful!!! Brings back memories. Your simplicity in conveying such deep thoughts makes you quite special. Keep them coming!!!

Regina Marie said...

"Crying on my shoulders
Riding on the train"..I like the reflection-

Anonymous said...

Its refreshing, like a breath of fresh air,
any one can find themselves between each lines.

Saadi said...

Your skills at pen manship are remarkable!
Keep at it!

judith ellis said...

You make be smile joyously!